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Blazing Pens,Smoking Lungs

Dive into poetry, Smoking a lot less, Less smoke,free breathing, Less stress on my chest, Longer life,my health, I know its for the best, Although stopping is so hard, So hard to digest, Ink versus Smoke, An internal test, Who will be victorious, In my contest......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/30/2012 3:26:00 PM
I am sure you will win this contest. Consider entering my Questionku contest. You are a creative guy, I think you would do well.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/1/2012 4:00:00 PM
thanks Richard think I wll
Date: 11/26/2012 4:58:00 PM
I'm glad..write don't smoke Light & Love
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/26/2012 8:42:00 PM
lol,thanks Debbie
Date: 11/17/2012 1:40:00 PM
How much clearer can a message be... Words so beautiful healthy message free... Good work Richard, the FDA should hire you right away.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/17/2012 2:17:00 PM
lol thanks Brian
Date: 7/13/2012 7:21:00 AM
Richard, Love the title. The message is clear.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/13/2012 12:52:00 PM
THANKS SHERESE
Date: 7/7/2012 11:07:00 PM
Hi Richard, once again, congratulations in Brian Strand's 186th contest. Take care, it's been fun reading many winners tonight* PD
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/8/2012 10:42:00 AM
thank you PD,It was fun
Date: 7/3/2012 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Richard. Love, Carol
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/3/2012 2:24:00 PM
thanks Carol
Date: 7/1/2012 6:36:00 PM
CONGRATS ON THE WIN, JAG
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/2/2012 2:40:00 PM
thanks Jag,holding up the trophy lol
Date: 6/11/2012 5:33:00 AM
The title drew me in and i wasn't disappointed. Been off tobacco products for five years now after using for 43.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/11/2012 8:22:00 AM
5 years,need a little of your strength,lol,thanks Anthony,gonna beat it....
Date: 6/10/2012 11:52:00 PM
You too hey? I'm trying to do the same myself...haha.I was told to just keep trying...I'm just about there myself.I'm on my last pack right now...Already bought the smoking losenges too! I'm here for ya..
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/11/2012 8:21:00 AM
thanks Dan needed a friend,hope the ink wins for us both....
Date: 6/9/2012 8:16:00 PM
tough....poetry can help you overcome the smoking gun!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/10/2012 4:52:00 AM
I am gonna give it my best shot,lol,thanks Doris
Date: 6/8/2012 2:25:00 PM
Oh Richard, I hope that ink wins! I was a smoker all my life and finally stopped about 8 years ago! You can do it! JUST KEEP WRITING! :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/8/2012 5:58:00 PM
ok taking your advice,thanks Samia
Date: 6/8/2012 8:57:00 AM
I hope the INK wins my friend :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/8/2012 5:57:00 PM
so do I,oxoxox Shaz
Date: 6/7/2012 1:55:00 PM
Here's hoping that your pen wins every time. Enjoyed reading your work today.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/8/2012 5:57:00 PM
hope so tooooo,thanks
Date: 6/7/2012 11:28:00 AM
Reminds me of the Allan Ginsberg series of poems"Don't smoke" Nice! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/8/2012 5:56:00 PM
thanks Matthew
Date: 6/6/2012 9:50:00 AM
Richard; this is good, smoking does kill, little by little. It is said that people that smoke die 10 years earlier than what they should. Again thanks for sharing. I don't smoke. Lucilla
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/6/2012 10:04:00 AM
thanks for the medical information,thanks for stopping by
Date: 6/5/2012 3:08:00 PM
LOL, cute! I hope the pen wins!!! Good luck...Tanya
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 3:39:00 PM
hope so tooo lol
Date: 6/5/2012 11:21:00 AM
Funny how what's best for us overall sometimes doesn't shine as bright as a quick fix. Ironic, right?! <3
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 2:59:00 PM
it is funny,you are right,lol thanks
Date: 6/5/2012 11:08:00 AM
An excellent piece here Richard!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 1:23:00 PM
thanks Ink,think you won..lol..
Date: 6/5/2012 10:04:00 AM
"LMAOF... This Was Great, Liked Reading It As I Smoke. Carma"
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 1:22:00 PM
dont over do,they say too much of anything will harm you,ha,thanks Carma
Date: 6/5/2012 8:35:00 AM
A very good one, Richard. Enjoyed this one a lot!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 9:10:00 AM
happy to have pleased,thanks Dinda
Date: 6/5/2012 7:13:00 AM
Wish you a loooong and happy life Richard!!!! Well written! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 8:27:00 AM
same to you sweet Anne,oxoxo thanks
Date: 6/5/2012 6:35:00 AM
Richard, well said, there can only be one winner..David
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 8:26:00 AM
horray for INK,thanks David
Date: 6/5/2012 6:30:00 AM
I always knew writing was good for you lol.. Cool write Richard.. xx Hugs xx
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2012 8:25:00 AM
thanks Tracie,just like God lol

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