Bitterless

Loving the bad out of him was not good with only heartache to look forward to. Hating him was not much better for one would have to love him first. Every cell in her was on fire with one sight, contact leaving her visionless and weak. She was to never know what was real, the sting is hardly even felt still, but the love that he once had he will forever not feel.

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Constance La France

Date: 7/22/2015 8:19:00 AM

Lee, deep and emotional free verse, there is a lot of pain between the lines in this write, a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances . .

Julia Ward

Date: 7/19/2015 1:10:00 AM

Complex and enjoyable... Thanks so much for sharing, Lee. Julia, :)

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2015 11:27:00 PM

Lee, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2015 11:25:00 PM

Lee Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**

Lee Carter
Date: 6/30/2015 11:54:00 PM

Thank you Skat ... I need to get busy reading some of yours, I think I saw had some wins too congrats : )

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/29/2015 8:22:00 PM

Hi again, Lee- well done on your contest placing, a worthy entry. You must be pleased as punch! Keep it up! Regards, Viv

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/24/2015 4:13:00 AM

- Hello Lee :) - I would be delighted to welcome you to P- Soup - Hope you will enjoy being here with us :) - Share your thoughts and words - Good luck with your writing :) - A quick greeting from Norway // Anne -Lise :)

Lee Carter
Date: 6/24/2015 4:31:00 AM

Hi Anne ... Thank you for the welcome : )

Skat A

Date: 6/24/2015 1:31:00 AM

Hi Lee, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lee Carter
Date: 6/24/2015 1:44:00 AM

Thanks for the nice not! I'm super excited to give this a try : ) looking forward to learning about poetry I'm not really sure I know what I'm doing lol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2015 12:40:00 AM

Lee, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lee Carter
Date: 6/24/2015 1:45:00 AM

Thank you linda I feel very welcome everyone has been so nice I'm looking forward to it all!

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/23/2015 10:37:00 PM

A lost cause, trapped in a vicious circle. Great write, Lee. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy your time here, sharing your work. Regards, Viv

Lee Carter
Date: 6/23/2015 11:59:00 PM

Wow thanks : ) so exciting I've never done anything like this it's a bit nerve racking!