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I write- mellifluous sweet murmuring poems- gossamer whispering words a labyrinth twisting and turning serendipity writes and woebegone sadramblingswithtears and all I want to do is share my feelings sweet murmuring poems-gossamer but here come the don'tdoitgang a labyrinth twisting and turning with their opinions stabbing their rigmarole wanting to make my safe harbour a hoosegow oh the words and wordsdribbling they let fly to our souls and my mellifluous sweet murmuring poems whispering the discontentannoyingwordgang a labyrinth twisting and turning come with their constanttellingus what to do smellfungas comments and I am guilty of everything it all I enter my poems written from the depths of my soul in whatyoucallmeaningless contests andIwinsometimes so bite me I leave comments lovelyandawesome with words like beautiful and wonderful so back off leavemealone bite me I like to post pictures with poems everheardoffreeimages I dwell behind a mighty high wall where I write- mellifluous sweet murmuring poems- gossamer whispering words a labyrinth twisting and turning serendipity writes and woebegone sadramblingswithtears and all I want to do is share my feelings ________________________ May 31, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/bite me Copyright Protected, ID 05-678-683-31 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bite Me, sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 2015 First Place

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Timothy Barry

Date: 3/26/2016 10:45:00 PM

Really feeling your pain here Broken.

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 10:23:00 AM

Timothy, thanks for visiting an oldie, taking the dust off and giving it life again, oh when I wrote this there was a lot of backstabbing going on, but that has passed now, I was inspired to write in this style by the late, great poet, EE Cummngs ~

Jill Spagnola

Date: 6/25/2015 1:58:00 PM

Wow! Again your verse always so welldersvingofitsrank... I enjoyed this very much :), jill

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/12/2015 11:00:00 PM

BW, I just stopped by to say congrats on your big win:) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 6/12/2015 7:31:00 PM

"Always in my thoughts " / " I am guilty of everything written from the depths of my soul " Hugs eve

The Grahamburglar

Date: 6/12/2015 4:28:00 PM

Wow, this is awesome, and very deserving of the win. Congratulations that youwinsometimes.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/12/2015 2:23:00 PM

Never stop sharing your feelings from your soul : ) .....this in an awesome write! Big congrats on your win! Hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2015 12:25:00 AM

That's awesome Broken, @-> LINDA <-@

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/12/2015 12:04:00 AM

Wonderful pen Broken wings! Congrats on first place win!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/11/2015 8:12:00 PM

Sorry, but I got to use one of your words I love this write a 7. Congratulations on this awesome win Hugs Eve

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/11/2015 6:05:00 PM

Hi B.W. An esoteric exploration bitten so many times. Beautiful prose!

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/11/2015 3:47:00 PM

Awesome poem, Broken! A huge congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 3:31:00 PM

LOL, still loving this poem. Broken, Congratulations in John's BITE ME contest. **SKAT**

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2015 3:28:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 6/11/2015 3:11:00 PM

I have heard it said that some people can tell you to go to hell and make you look forward to the trip.....This is probably the only BITE ME!! that would have them say "THANK YOU". You mixed a little of TS with a smooth repetition and several "BITE ME'S" Thanks for playing in my sand box.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/6/2015 7:33:00 PM

Way to go, 8 in the top 100 and rising fast!

Constance La France
Date: 6/6/2015 9:57:00 PM

Really !!!! That's awesome

Che Fontana

Date: 6/5/2015 4:42:00 AM

wow, nice work. but, damn it, it's a trick or treat :(

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/3/2015 8:16:00 AM

I love what you did here Broken Wings, the repetition of the lines plays in mind the biting and biting scene.. :D its witty and it made me smile.. love the metaphors used.. =')~OLIVE ELOISA

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/2/2015 11:55:00 AM

Well my friend, I certainly hope you don't bite ME...Ouch! Look, I'm bleeding profusely and this may require stitches. Nurse! Nurse! (Are you a nurse by any chance?) LOVE the repetition of the 1st and next to last verses with a great lead-in to the latter. The lack of spacing throughout as well. Gostraightomyfavsdonotpassgo...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/2/2015 8:02:00 AM

Delicious my dear!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/1/2015 3:29:00 PM

Well bite me this is a unique poem and well done. So nice to see your comment on my poem. Have not been writing lately and need a heart to heart with my muse. love phyl

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/1/2015 1:17:00 PM

This is your sweet style shining through, Broken Wings, to get your message across in a kind, yet convicting way! Loved it :)

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2015 7:20:00 AM

good luck on the contest:), enjoyed your write ~Luv S.K.A.T.

Skat A
Date: 6/1/2015 10:13:00 PM

Thank you for the visit to my poem. Loving this poem a third time.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2015 2:01:00 AM

WOW - we both went for a total change to our usual style - wow wow wow hard hitting you sure bit me with this one - you tell em Broken Wings - the knockers and the mockers they can go swivel! :-) 7 and faves ! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/31/2015 11:29:00 PM

I only saw the cat before....don't listen to THEM....write for you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2015 11:17:00 PM

LOVE the cat and love the winding style you used with your words as well.