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Bite Me, Bite Me

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Bitter words spew out of your well-polished poison pen Insult me, go on belittle me with your vile vitriolic venom Think you are better than me – hell no way! Every word that spills from your pathetic pen sucks My one poem to your river of rancid rubbish Each to their own, but I will NEVER change my style Bite me, go on bite me - like a sweet juicy apple I can bite back like a Rottweiler – taunt me enough and I will snap Tart sour words full of malice I CAN pen perfectly Except I keep my opinion and hostile words in my head Me, I don’t pretend to be anything I am not Every word you pen is pure malignant malice A fiction write purely for contest.... or is it! You decide! 05~31~15 Contest: Bite Me – John Lawless

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2015 12:26:00 AM

Jan, XOOL WIN....PD

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 2:41:00 PM

Thanks Linda - is this the 'real me' i wonder hee hee:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/12/2015 12:09:00 AM

Wonderful pen Jan! Congrats on big win!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 12:15:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/11/2015 6:15:00 PM

Hi Jan: A real winner!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 12:14:00 AM

Thanks Ralph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2015 5:51:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 12:14:00 AM

Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 3:47:00 PM

"Big congrats to you, Jan. soupmail.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 4:07:00 PM

Thanks Andrea - replied:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/11/2015 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan! I knew this would be a winner the first time I read it! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 4:06:00 PM

Thanks Sandra I was so pleased to place highly:-) Hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 3:34:00 PM

awesome

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 4:06:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 6/11/2015 3:24:00 PM

JAN.....this is the first time I got to see the picture along with this pissa rant. Where do you get those amazing visuals?? It has always amused me when people mistake gentleness for weakness. Thank you for your participation in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 3:33:00 PM

I just google certain phrases John - when i saw this image I HAD to go with it - I think people were a bit shocked to see me write like this - thanks for inspiring me with your contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/5/2015 9:34:00 AM

A most brilliant slam this is, Jan! You definitely achieved your objective. I love it and I love the power behind it! Well done, my friend! Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 12:22:00 PM

Thanks Pandita - this poem shocked many people that I can write like this so i did do a follow up poem about having to go with the flow of my muse lol:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/3/2015 10:12:00 AM

Jan, a good take in the contest... =') savory is your poetry! ~olive eloisa

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2015 10:52:00 AM

Thanks Olive - love the new avatar !:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/2/2015 7:32:00 AM

I took a bite and find you to be delicious!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2015 7:37:00 AM

Aww I am blushing now:-) Hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2015 11:15:00 PM

you are you, sweet and caring

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2015 12:47:00 AM

I try:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2015 11:14:00 PM

lol, Jan, the picture has me laughing. I don't consider this to be fiction, we all get a little feisty sometimes. I like the way you tell us like it is. That's what we like about you. You are you no matter what. SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2015 12:47:00 AM

There are elements of truth in it Skat but I remember writing a poem about PD - she asked us to write a hate poem - I did - Darren was so shocked when he read it he got me to withdraw it - I wont be sending him this one! Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/1/2015 5:08:00 PM

Wow!!! Jan, you sure know how to slam!! Pure fiction, eh! Wonder what brought this about! This would also be appropriate for the slamming contest. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 5:15:00 PM

I think this has shocked people that I can write like this Paul - I simply have to go with the flow of my pen - John wanted vitriol I think I delivered it and more lol - I must look for the slam contest I haven't seen it yet:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2015 3:48:00 PM

jan, does our poem have to be vitriol?? I better read john's rules again.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 3:50:00 PM

No it can be sweet or bitter - I just chose the bitter aspect which I guess has surprised a lot of people lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 6/1/2015 7:11:00 AM

Whoaaaa! Hope I never get on your bad side, my tigress sister!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 7:15:00 AM

'Farmer Giles' may be a bit more up your street jack lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 7:13:00 AM

Just a bit of a departure in style Jack lol - purely for contest - John wanted vitriol - I think I managed that and more lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2015 3:51:00 AM

wow, a brave write from you, dear jan!... are you really this firm?.. i won;t mess around with you, haha!.. this is gutsy, lovely!..will soupie you later... huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 3:55:00 AM

John wanted vitriol and I think people are shocked I can write this way - it surprises me what flows from my pen - but I have no control over my muse lol the last poem I wrote like this Darren got me to remove - it has since been reformatted and is on soup lol - but this is purely for the contest not my usual style! Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2015 11:42:00 PM

hmmmm, that was a great final note you put there!!! Jan, you got some GREAT SLAM in you. I have an idea for this contest but it won't be anything like this. Sadly, because I sure would enjoy going after a few meanies, but fear I don't have it in me!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:36:00 AM

You know me Andrea - this is a bit of a departure from my usual style lol - I am stunned with the way it went and I guess it will shock people I can write like this - John wanted vitriol I think I delivered and the alliteration helps make the poem more powerful. The last poem I wrote like this which was also for a contest Darren got me to withdraw it - I think it shocked him my pen can spew like this lol:-) I better not send him this one! Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2015 10:44:00 PM

oh noooo, I am a man, you are a woman, I thought my job was to piss you off!!!! sorry!!!! LOL ok ok I loved this, poetic and artistic, and full of life!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:31:00 AM

A change to my usual style Arthur - I guess this will shock some who are used to my humourous pens - sure shocked me but I have to go with the flow of my muse - John wanted vitriol I think I gave that and more lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/31/2015 9:55:00 PM

LOL Jan! You have a way, do ya! I'm afraid I can't join the contest...it would just be so delicious to just give in, and I can't do that to my tender heart...haha. This is better, I get to feel your roar...lol!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:28:00 AM

GO for it Kim - shock people like I have done lol - fictional write and it was great to do it show a different side to my poetic 'inabilities' lol :-) Hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/31/2015 9:00:00 PM

You are one angry cookie. I hope this was fictional. I had a poem published in the NY Times a few weeks ago and got different reactions form people who wrote in. Some were positive and some were anything but! Damn the critics - let's move our pens! Peace and love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:26:00 AM

I have to go with the flow of my pen Matthew - usually it is humour - this is a change in direction for me and I guess it will shock people that I can write like this BUT it is purely for the contest. Congrats on having your poem published - we will all get criticism it is just accepting that opinions differ:-) Hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/31/2015 8:10:00 PM

whoa! i was looking forward to figuring out who this was about! oh well, better that it's fiction. you sure let it all hang out, though, jan, and i enjoyed imagining this side of you! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:20:00 AM

Pure fiction ...or is it lol ...my style has been criticised in the past and I was at a low ebb and nearly gave up writing but I am strong now and nothing and no one here will ever get me down regarding my writing ability or inability lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/31/2015 7:11:00 PM

Wow! Go girl! No humor here for sure! Love that last line!! Such a great write for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:18:00 AM

Purely for the contest Sandra - I wanted to get a lot of alliteration in the poem to make it pack more of a poetic punch lol:-) I just hope John likes it lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/31/2015 6:26:00 PM

Oh oh, bitter words out of a pen. This is too funny. You are definitely a force to be reckoned with. I would be afraid to do anything mean or nasty to you. Oh my ouch!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:17:00 AM

I hope I do come across as humourous Duke - this style is a real departure for me - I have only written one other poem like this and my poetry partner Darren got me to withdraw it - the other poem too was written for a contest but never submitted in the end - maybe I should stope entering them lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/31/2015 6:22:00 PM

Your words sting like a bee and your lines float like a butterfly....a woman to be reckoned with for sure. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 12:14:00 AM

Nooooo Emile I am a mere bird brain lol - I think people are shocked when I pen something like this - I did another poem last year that my poetry partner Darren got me to withdraw as it was so unlike me - I have since revamped that poem and posted it again - this is written purely for the contest - John wanted vitriol I think i provided it lol:-) Hugs janxx