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Bird's of a Feather

Bird's of a feather, Carol's Cards and Jack's Jays What better way to end these October days One team did win One took it on the chin That's baseball, it ain't perfect but it can still amaze © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 10/16/2015 1:48:00 PM

'It Still Can Amaze'... is part of a maze... And is like 'Birds of a Feather'... or so I might say... LOL... Don't worry... we all do this eventually!You're not alone. I spent a week rewritting an old poem and never noticed it... Rather flusterated when I finally realized it!... And yes... I'll probably do it again.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/16/2015 10:41:00 AM

Early Alzhiemers John John.lol Just kidding Sir Jack, little technical difficulty. There was an old man from Nantucket, who kept all his cash in a bucket. He met a girl named Nan. Nan ran away with a man as for the bucket Nan took it! I stole that one Jack. Go Blue Jays!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Michael Tor
Date: 10/16/2015 10:45:00 AM

Yep lol Good morning Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2015 10:44:00 AM

Hey if the old brain-o has a problem writing one... STEAL ONE!!! LOL!