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Bird House

BIRD HOUSE In a big shady tree Way up high hard to see This tidy little home Where feathered friends may roam Peck a crust of stale bread Or safely clear their heads What mystery through that door? What treasures on the floor? Fancy a twiggy nest Wood grass straw and the rest Maybe a bottle cap Stuffed with foam for a nap There was a special pair Who loved to stay up there One a bright red color Rose patches the other They were Cardinal mates On those wintry dates Returned every year The memory so dear Many years now have passed Bird house battered alas Strong winds taken it down Splintered on the ground A look inside a tear But then I smile no fear The nest? “Angel kept!” I sing “And wife’s lost wedding ring!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/30/2012 1:01:00 AM
Sorry you are having difficulties with the laptop, Daver. You should focus on writing a bunch of poems and then when you can use the computer better, you will have a lot of posts you can make!! Can you fix the problem? I sure hope so. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:44:00 PM
THis seems symbolic to me too, Daver. It's a lovely poem that I am glad I finally came to see. I think you had said you were having trouble getting to Soup. Is it all ok now? Looks like you are back here and going strong again!! Yep, the sedan sucks next to the sports car. Signs of getting old! I got a kick out of your comments today.
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Date: 6/27/2012 2:01:00 PM
brimming with emotional appeal,daver.. a ring for eternity!... well done..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:02:00 AM
Sounds likea true story Dave, a wedding ring found; isn't that great. Were the pussycats watching this house too?
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Date: 6/24/2012 3:57:00 PM
Such magic you entrusted the reader with my friend ! "That Ring" ! Awesome write dear poet ! I too have had the blessing of journeying betwixt the bird's homes, and what a site they can be dear sir ! Again...an awesome write Daver ! Have a wonderful life my fellow ! Much love..............james
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Date: 6/22/2012 3:07:00 PM
love the journey,hope you said thanks to the birds,lol,nice write Daver
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:23:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this flight of fancy Daver; A lot of feeling in the lines..)
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:16:00 AM
Koo koo, this wasn't about a man-made house, but about one they'd diligently built themselves. I messed up with my reading the first time round, Daver, so sorry. It doesn't change that you'd been touched by the "battered" house though. Enjoying this write!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:06:00 AM
I like this one Daver, very well written. - Welcome to the "bird house" every year - oxox hug Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/21/2012 8:33:00 AM
Hey Daver! Nice description of their bird home! It would have been sad that the ravages of time had taken it's toll on their house. Still they are a clever lot and I'm sure they'd built their own nearby! Hey, did your wife truly lose her ring?:( I'd lost my husband's.:( He'd said to hold onto it while he went for a swim in the ocean. I started beach combing and forgot it was in my hand.:(( We never did find it, with the tides coming in. Anyhow..BEST WISHES! love, Mikki
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