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Bewitching

How come you hold the key To the Adam's Apple and Gravity You allure me in like a meteor in space And scrumptious is thy Apple's taste Just as Eve I couldn't resist your charm Your aura makes me feel at home and warm Same as Earth, I hover in the space around Like the sun's pull, you keep me gladly bound So here I stand, ___ 'Over the Moon' Content __ within your enchanting cocoon *_____________________________________* Paghunda Zahid

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Date: 7/15/2023 10:31:00 AM
What an exquisite write Paghunda, enchanting and breathtaking -as you are. Hugs and love, Jennifer.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:17:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, I am delighted by your kind remarks... Blessings
Date: 1/31/2023 6:56:00 PM
This sounds like it's in the zone! Well done.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:18:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 8/19/2022 12:02:00 PM
Your poem draws the reader in with enchanting lines, Lovely write
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:18:00 AM
Means a lot Joseph. Thank you for beautiful remarks
Date: 8/18/2022 9:54:00 AM
This is so romantic and full of the awe and wonder of a lover! Congratulations on your win!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam
Date: 8/11/2022 11:49:00 PM
And here I stand, __Dazed_ "over the moon" Content _within your enchanting cocoon
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Date: 8/8/2022 10:22:00 PM
Love this this wonderful poetry.
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Date: 8/7/2022 10:09:00 PM
An enchanting penning you've created, Paghunda. My compliments on your placement, Aloha~William
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Hillo
Date: 8/7/2022 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Romantic lines to present to your love. Way to go. Sara
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:19:00 AM
Thank you dear Sara. I appreciate your comment
Date: 8/7/2022 1:09:00 PM
Delightful rhyming couplets, Paghunda. I like your romantic creativity, especially the end couplet. ~ Regards // paul
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:20:00 AM
Means a lot Paul. I am pleased by your review
Date: 8/7/2022 10:48:00 AM
Paghunda, CONGRATS on your win with this piece about romantic chemistry. Janice
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Janice
Date: 8/6/2022 1:31:00 PM
Enjoyed your enchanting poem, Paghunda. Love can be bewitching. Bill
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:21:00 AM
Indeed, esp for poets like us. Lol. Thank you
Date: 8/6/2022 10:21:00 AM
another lovely one from you, Paghunda. So enchanting.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 8/5/2022 7:27:00 AM
Wow! This is a beautifully romantic poem my dear friend Paghunda. Very well-written with great flow of rhyme. So love it and enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings. Hugs
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:22:00 AM
I am delighted by your kind comment dear Len. Very encouraging. Means a lot. Thank you
Date: 8/4/2022 6:45:00 PM
Sweet one. To be or not to be 'witched' is seriously no question, I see! Light and Levity, gw
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:23:00 AM
Haha yeah.. We all want it. Thank you
Date: 8/4/2022 12:29:00 PM
Lovely imagery in this enchanting, romantic poem. :)
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn
Date: 8/3/2022 11:08:00 PM
A beautiful love experience, wonderfully conveyed ! Enjoyed reading this, dear poet friend !
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Valsa
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Valsa

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