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Best Rondeau - Ice Has Melted

Ice has melted, river gurgling White and pink phlox fresh and sparkling Gone with you were lovely small larks Back in your eyes those speaking sparks Hope in our breast sweet and stirring Life is always a train running Some time sincere some time cunning In tide and ebb lie light and dark Ice has melted Warm day ends and light is dimming In moonlit night hearts are brimming Life calls us in starlit dark park Enticing spring in crescent arc Nature is so self-fulfilling Ice has melted _______________________________________________ July 11, 2016 For the Contest: Best Rondeau Poem sponsored by Laura Loo

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Date: 7/12/2016 10:27:00 AM
Well executed Rondeau, my friend. All the best for the contest. ~karam~
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Date: 7/12/2016 5:59:00 AM
Marvelously done dear, Probir! Good luck and a seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/12/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/12/2016 5:10:00 AM
nicely written... i like the second stanza the most...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/12/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thank you ...

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