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Beside the sea

Beside the sea i wait~ the dreamy dawn to shine and paint horizon's hue in tawny, taupe and teal unveiling vivid view. Beside the sea I wait~ the early birds in flight arching like tiara making sky a painting of placid aurora. Beside the sea I wait~ the whisper of the breeze soaring as sunshine sings her stellar symphony inspiring sweet musings. Beside the sea I wait~ the crashing of the waves sparkling like sunlit snow as they return to shore my love will, too, I know. 9 April 2022 Form M- Monchielle- New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme: 4. sea/ocean Rhymes checked at rhymezones.com Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 10/24/2022 7:44:00 PM
Thanks JCB for sharing this picturesque poem. A nice read.
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Date: 4/17/2022 3:29:00 PM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
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Date: 4/16/2022 10:46:00 PM
Splendid poem and the imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on your win and this superb monchielle poem! Hugs
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Date: 4/16/2022 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 4/16/2022 4:21:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/15/2022 9:34:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this new win. I love your "Beside the sea" write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
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Date: 4/15/2022 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine poem and a well-deserved win.
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Date: 4/14/2022 10:22:00 PM
I missed seeing this as poem of the day ! Now let me convey my double congratulations on your excellent win and the POTD
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Date: 4/14/2022 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD and your win:) I love this one:)
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Date: 4/14/2022 9:40:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win in the contest!
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Date: 4/14/2022 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations, again!
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Date: 4/12/2022 8:24:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece in a challenging format. I wish you the best in the contest. - Ken
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Date: 4/10/2022 7:54:00 PM
JCBB, congrats. I take it as good advice from your poem: "Beside the sea, I wait."
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Date: 4/10/2022 7:13:00 PM
This is beautiful, dreamy and romantic, so soft and serene. Your thoughts whisper along the page with such elegance and grace. I'm drifting in these tender moments. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 4/10/2022 10:00:00 PM
Thank you Brandy...That's what I feel as I write this poem. More blessings to you.
Date: 4/10/2022 6:35:00 PM
So happy to see you hold the POTD for today! The comparison between sea and love is soothing. Perfect read for Palm Sunday! Pangie
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Date: 4/10/2022 9:59:00 PM
Thank you Pangie..
Date: 4/10/2022 5:27:00 PM
great painting, JCB, congratulations on POTD. Blessings my friend
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Date: 4/10/2022 9:56:00 PM
Thank you dear Eve. More blessing to you.
Date: 4/10/2022 1:11:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Congrats on POTD. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Debra.
Date: 4/10/2022 12:01:00 PM
Wonderful POTD! "Beside the sea I wait" your imagery fascinating! :)Paulette
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Paulette.
Date: 4/10/2022 10:28:00 AM
Congrats for your POTD.
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thanks much!!
Date: 4/10/2022 10:25:00 AM
So glad to see this as POTD, happy to return with congratulations!
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:09:00 PM
Thank you again Michelle.
Date: 4/10/2022 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, JCB, and good luck in the contest! Bill
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Bill.
Date: 4/10/2022 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A beautiful sea write. I am walking in the sand with the birds flying over head. Have a great/blessed day....................
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Paula. That moment is so sublime!
Date: 4/10/2022 8:13:00 AM
Wow! "Beside the sea I wait" - Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:07:00 PM
Thanks you so much.
Date: 4/10/2022 8:12:00 AM
A beautiful poem, beautifully-written, JCB. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Milton. Blessings.
Date: 4/10/2022 7:08:00 AM
Such a beautiful expression of love an yearning JCB! Congratulations on your POTD honors for your romantic write full of lovely imagery!!
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Mike.
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