Premiere Contest WinnerBenign Bliss Burn

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Written: October 26, 2025, for contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker Line of inquiry: “In-form polarities merge in the heart One that became two becomes one again Breath by breath, feeling bliss ignition start God’s grace in-pours as we dance in the rain” ************* In the steadfast syllogism's silence, where the morning light gently fades I observe myself — indecisive, shaking, My hunger is reflected in me I yearn with fervent intensity, For the deep transmutation of kinship. The delicate grief of inhalation, vented by a quiet sigh As the specters of unease melt into the void. And vivid clashes remain lucid, Beneath the weight of tears. Amorphous yearning takes shape in the aureate arc of surrender. This is not a violent conflagration, no acherontic pyre of passion— but a seraphic simmer, an ever-changing susurrus who sings in the sinews of the heart. I am ablaze and mortified, a charming contradiction of fire and delight, where the anodyne and the enthusiastic combines in muted conflagration. That ancient apiary — the heart — buzzes with ambrosian hymns. Each beat, a cosmic blessing, a burst of ambrosian pulse. Here, under the empyrean eye, I do not abhor the fire— I become it. Not to eviscerate, but to bloom. Under the balmily breathing heavens, where Aurora flushes in alabaster sighs, I start—barefoot, puzzled, overflowing with benedictions I cannot name, aloud. Beating with a buoyant rhythm, between delight and burn, a ballet of buoyancy between the fragile and the infinite. In the stillness of the body, bloom blessings. The slight exchange of breath with outer surroundings — every inhale a balm, Every exhale a flame. The lure of anguish beckons me forth. How the shapeless yearning morphs, into a bright serenade, a labyrinth of luminous emptiness drifting softly with a soothing cadence. Below the umbrella of the aged, I release the rapture’s remorse and bask in the benevolent blaze. I am content with simply existing. No truism, no clamor— just the deep delight of resonating, the blessing of silence simmering in my bones. A spirit, unquiet, lingers deep within, Luminous and resplendently vibrant. Asteria permeates my bloodstream The beauty of her song is seductive A mysterious hint of elegance Her melody is simply enchanting I am thirsty, yet I am fulfilled. The burn is not noxious — not a pyre, but a lovely beat, melodious, Not a curse, but a seraphic ubiquity, that makes me halcyon with serendipity. I do not condemn the blaze — I invite it I embody it, It is bright, blithe, and boundless It is the breath I have become.
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Date: 11/19/2025 10:38:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations, dear poet, on your top trophy win with a superb poem, each stanza shining with a beautiful imagery, carved with a masterly diction of choice flowing smoothly like a picturesque river. It is hard to pick which stanza to highlight as all of them sparkles bright. Sending you the light of sunshine from my country.
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Date: 11/18/2025 8:59:00 PM
Back to your gorgeous poem with Congratulations on your top trophy win. Remember, this time you have pushed back 59 other contestants and not merely 34. That gives added sweetness to your win.
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Date: 11/18/2025 4:24:00 AM
“ The burn is not noxious — not a pyre, but a lovely beat, melodious, Not a curse, but a seraphic ubiquity, that makes me halcyon with serendipity.” Another thought provoking masterpiece worthy of top win! Congratulations Sotto!
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Date: 11/18/2025 4:19:00 AM
That ancient apiary — the heart — buzzes with ambrosian hymns. Each beat, a cosmic blessing, a burst of ambrosian pulse. Wow! I can see why you won first place, your vocabulary has wings Sotto, beautiful! Congrats
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Date: 11/17/2025 9:49:00 PM
"The burn is not noxious — not a pyre, but a lovely beat, melodious, Not a curse, but a seraphic ubiquity, that makes me halcyon with serendipity." - Indeed, very powerful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/30/2025 9:32:00 PM
"In the stillness of the body, bloom blessings. The slight exchange of breath with outer surroundings — every inhale a balm, Every exhale a flame." Once more let me reiterate.... 'dear friend, you are amazingly gifted'.You can go on waxing eloquent on any subject with such depth and panache. This turn when polarities merge and you reach a heightened moment is exhilarating. You see it not as a curse, but a seraphic ubiquity, that makes you blaze with serendipity and you become the spirit and the breath. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 10/27/2025 10:46:00 AM
Gorgeous poetry. Bet it's a winner
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Date: 10/26/2025 5:33:00 PM
wow, such a masterpiece...written with your own Sotto style that made for an engaging and enlightening. The last verse resonated with me. best wishes with this contest entry.
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Date: 10/26/2025 5:20:00 PM
Wow ,Sotto, quite courageous and beautiful- a burning flame, glad you discovered it. :)
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