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Believe-Waltz Wave

From the stairs those little voices call Did he come? Christmas morning cries of delight and surprise from those who still believe child ,adult alike smile with good will

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James Inman

Date: 12/30/2015 2:46:00 PM

I believe, Barbara. Sweet write.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/30/2015 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your win!

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/30/2015 1:36:00 AM

Love the innocence in this, Barbara. Congrats! Viv x

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 9:54:00 PM

BARBARA, a beautiful win.... Congrats on your placement. Love **SKAT**

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/29/2015 9:17:00 PM

Your poem paints a nice picture. Congrats on placing, Barbara. Janice

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/29/2015 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful entry, well done. Happy New Year.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2015 4:31:00 PM

this is wonderful. Congrats for a great win, Barbara.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2015 1:57:00 PM

This is delightful Barbara:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/29/2015 1:03:00 PM

You portrayed a perfect Christmas morning, Barbara! Congrats on your 3rd place win and thank you for participating! Happy New Year! Love, Kim

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/18/2015 8:30:00 PM

touching piece. I am impressed by the simplicity of hthis form, new to me. Great brevity form. I enjoyed you sweet message of Christmas expectations, Barbara.

Mockingbird Stevenson

Date: 11/30/2015 10:08:00 PM

this is lovely. thankyou for sharing