Before You Drown In Coffee

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*JUST TO PASS THE TIME, A TIDBIT FOR YOUR COFFEE BREAK. Okay, this is Anywhere, USA, and its school bus makes its first stop. Eight kids get on. Now the second stop, two kids get off, and twelve kids get on. Now the third stop, seven kids get off, and four kids get on. Now the fourth stop, two kids get on, and nobody gets off. Now the at the fifth stop, four kids get off, and nine kids get on. Now for the last stop, eleven kids get on, and seven kids get off. Okay, now that you have arrived at the school and before all the kids get off, tell me, --what is the color hair of the bus driver?

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/18/2019 5:29:00 PM

Hello Willisam Kekaula, I would say that the the bus driver 's hair is unkempt greyish brown.Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/19/2019 12:33:00 PM

I forgot to say beautiful hair that I have! Oh thank you.Bless you.! Darlene

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/18/2019 5:32:00 PM

You forgot to say, "beautiful", hair that you have Darlene, Bless You! ~ Aloha William