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Before the Gale

Below the edge of the storm, a quietness, a silence is shaken from the trees, from the shingles, from the long ears of field rabbits. There is rain in the air, a downpour not yet arrived, it is only a rumor a hush beyond the hedgerow. Mountains are snowing in the distance, the sky is falling in ice waves in the distance, yet that distance is mute. Here at the edge of uproar, there is a great stillness, a silence louder than a cocked gun, a quiet more clamorous than a fledglings red open beak as it waits, and waits, and waits.

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Date: 2/15/2020 11:19:00 AM
Very well written Eric :)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 2/15/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 2/15/2020 10:38:00 AM
Silence shaken from the trees...silence louder than a cocked gun. Wow, the imagery! Well done!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 2/15/2020 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Kim, silence often speaks to us. Much obliged for the comment.

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