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Bedtime On Tramp - Part Two

He helped himself up to the wind's foremost blow On a hillock where the moon searched his impecunious pockets, Waking a flood in his eyes like swelled teats. He opened wide to receive the Lady, this Endymion cheats, No worm-wood virus but sweet philtre phials. Finishing, he is a lover... He sought the bosom of Erebus in her wildest glow. He moved and with him, his bed And time moved. A scavenger cat clawing a bushman's billy-can Some hard laid by in his work, purred with surveillance In disgust over him turning tins over in the bin. Together he cast the lid by to biltong and raisin: The cat devours, he abandons the prandial dance. Pausing, he is a server... He ate them all like yams those starved seamen. He moved and with him, his bed And time moved. Over the mellowy orchard, for a while he blotted, Down the glen he skied on the mossy rock And rubbed clean in the steamy fume of the fall. Clambering on the paddock, the love-grass over him gall His rag-patches, bee-combed, mock. Swearing, he is a dreamer... He tore tearfully through the palliasse of touch-me-not. He moved and with him, his bed And time moved. Now upon the road of life, he chanced And espied himself the mutest spectre dust, Cruising his hour in the propelled sleep of night. He saw himself waft from this mount to that bight And saw it was not wont or just. Laughing, he is a god... But this infidel purpose of man be countenanced. He moved and with him, his bed And time moved. (c) T. Wignesan - 1948 in Tracks of a Tramp. Singapore-Kuala Lumpur: Rayirath Publications, 1961.

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Date: 8/8/2015 7:04:00 AM
A very remarkable piece T! Congrats for being featured in PS home page! ;-)
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T Wignesan
Date: 8/10/2015 10:42:00 AM
Very many thanks, Teddy. For fear of repeating myself, I beg you to see my other reactions to similar remarks. I'm afraid I'm not one for entering this endless "give and take" going on in the soup. I'm far too busy just keeping the "final" door from slamming onto my face...Your remark taken in the spirit it was meant, of course! Every good wish.
Date: 8/7/2015 3:32:00 PM
Hi Skat A & Lyric Man! You are both most kind to remark on the suitability of the piece in a more airy place in the soup, but I'd had wished you had both like Eilliott Bowe (see here below) hit the bottle even before confronting my "amputated" poem. This's not to say the Soup hasn't its own winning ways to keep some poems (and their creators) from drowning through neglect. I wish I had more time and the inclination to illustrate my point a little further than this cryptic remark.Every good wish.
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:00:00 PM
Hi T Wignesan, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/28/2012 1:46:00 PM
Superb poem dear poet, I enjoyed this much!!! STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!
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T Wignesan
Date: 5/28/2012 2:06:00 PM
Hi Elliott ! I hope you followed the first part in an earlier post. I'm sure you did. I feel quite humbled by your effervescence. I didn't think a poem I wrote 64 years ago could retain some of its fire still. Warm thanks from Paris. Wignesan

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