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Because You Truly Embraced My Soul

Because you truly embraced my soul Written By Dean Masciarelli Friday, March 12, 2010 I don’t know how much more I can honestly bare because I still care about you more then you will ever know with all that I am and more and I always will care about you Because you truly embraced my soul But with me being here and you being there And living our lives separately like we are now instead of being together like we could be I thought it would be important for you to know that the loneliness has finally gotten the best of me But at least we both had some wonderful memories that we shared with each other when we were together that we can cherish forever Because they were truly magical moments And they will never be forgotten Because when you were here we were able to love each other Unconditionally From the very beginning and forever more And for that alone I am honestly grateful Because what we had together when we were with each other was truly a love story that was worth remembering I don’t know how much more I can honestly bare because I still care about you more then you will ever know with all that I am and more and I always will care about you Because you truly embraced my soul

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Date: 3/14/2010 9:15:00 AM
that writing was truely beautiful, very delightful
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:29:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 3/12/2010 2:55:00 PM
Well, Dean, from a "hopeless romantic", all is not lost..not yet..until one of you say it's over, it ain't over! don't let distance come between you...there's e-mail, there's skype..there's at&t..and last but not least, there's good ol' postal mail... so if this is from your heart, your truth, make it happen... life is too short...if you love like what you described..then make it happen.. don't let it go. Peace and love, your friend, audrey
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Date: 3/12/2010 11:25:00 AM
Lord knows I felt this way.... Took me a while, but I have become a better man after dealing with my loss.... Thought provoking, good write my friend....:JP]
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Date: 3/12/2010 10:57:00 AM
You express well the sadness of losing someone who still holds your heart, Dean. Most people have been through this experience and it's hard to move on. A moving, heartfelt poem! Love, Carolyn
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