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Beautiful Scars I Wear On My Soul

I wear BEAUTIFUL SCARS in my soul that can’t be e r a s e d. Wounds s t a r v i n g for SUTURES needing to be embraced- I fear the serendipity of these scars have given illumination, as I seize the DARKNESS that e n v e l o p e s my given creation. Used grammar checker on PS Checked rhymes at: Rhymezone.com Date written: March 24, 2019 Contest: Writing Challenge 5, March 2019, Four Lines - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 4/9/2019 8:07:00 PM
Wow! Potent poetry, Lu. Your dramatic and dynamic imagery is captivating, especially your second line. Superb artistry! Belated congrats on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/14/2019 1:10:00 PM
thank you so much :) You are sweet lovely Susan. :)-luloo
Date: 3/29/2019 10:54:00 AM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~
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Date: 4/14/2019 1:09:00 PM
many thanks sweet lady :) I am so grateful and honored. :)-luloo
Date: 3/27/2019 2:21:00 PM
- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2019 1:09:00 PM
many thanks sweet Sunshine :)-luloo
Date: 3/24/2019 9:19:00 AM
Magical write...Mystical incense...
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/14/2019 1:09:00 PM
thank you so much :)-luloo

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