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Beautiful Lady

Beautiful lady ~combs her long blond hair In front of mirror ~she would often stare With eyes that glitter ~on sky blue nights Enchanting images ~ she magically comes alive Beautiful lady ~ combs from roots to nerves Caressing fibers ~ releasing love transfers Each stroke of hand ~ her hair breathes to life Her smiles angelic ~ the dreams of my eyes Beautiful lady ~I’m in love with you Completely captured ~by things you do Is it your essence ~your mind body talk Natural seduction ~ the shape of heaven your walk Beautiful lady ~would you marry me A wonderful family ~it would surely be Lovely children ~ a house we can call our home I'll sit and watch ~ your beautiful hair you comb

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/10/2019 8:17:00 PM

Oh, I was enchanted by the romantic flair of your beautiful poem, dear Arturo. Your poetic artistry shines in this amorous piece. Warmest wishes always, mon ami.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/10/2019 8:46:00 PM

Sunshine is back... great to read you...beautiful lady...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/1/2019 9:25:00 PM

My fingers have always twirled in my hair, they still do- to this day. :) You have captured the moment so beautifully here within your words. ~ Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/2/2019 11:52:00 AM

"tentacles of emotions" Yes, that is a possibility.

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/2/2019 10:01:00 AM

It has something special about it... tentacles of emotions maybe...All the best Brandy...

Eve Roper

Date: 4/1/2019 1:49:00 PM

Great imagery of describing the surroundings you are a romantic . Hugs Eve ~`*

Eve Roper
Date: 4/2/2019 2:06:00 PM

and you will do it well my friend

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/1/2019 4:55:00 PM

I declared this day, Romantic Mondays...will try to write one every week... Thanks Eve

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/1/2019 11:38:00 AM

Arturo, this is a beautiful poem--of longing, I think. Line 4 implies she isn't real?? Janice

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/1/2019 12:04:00 PM

Her reflection in the mirror seem to come alive... another her...on the other side...Something like that I meant...All the best Janice

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/1/2019 9:58:00 AM

So beautiful. How you focused on her hair as the description of her whole beauty.

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/1/2019 10:23:00 AM

This thing call love...is indescribable...a hand can speak volumes and a smile heal broken hearts...captured by hair...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/1/2019 8:45:00 AM

She really has long beautiful hair..no wonder you fell in love. I enjoyed this romantic write..a lovely flow..just like the essence of love.

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/1/2019 8:53:00 AM

Bonjour Vijay...Romantic Mondays...will try to write one every week...All the best my friend...Thanks