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Beautiful Girl

Beautiful Girl I see this beautiful girl looking at me In the mirror looking back at me Red rose lips beautiful chin all my body nice and tin I look to my eyes they are black and blue I do not want to look it reminds me of you You the bully I gave my heart to You have no right to do what you do Your all sorry telling me I don’t understand You trying to make me feel sorry for you Twisted words all your good to do Years have gone bye I look to my beautiful eye I do not see that monster anymore

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/14/2017 11:55:00 PM

Great poem, but not sure who's doing what to who. Which means who is the abuser. My mama told me "don't ever let a man hit me. But, hey I posted new poems. Or you can start where you left off. Or not :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/15/2017 4:54:00 AM

Hi Debbie , I was reading a few of your latest writes very enjoyable thanks for sharing :))))big hugs from Ireland

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 5/30/2017 12:47:00 PM

nice poem poet niall

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/30/2017 2:09:00 PM

Hi Eye , nice to meet , thank you for dropping bye :)))

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/29/2017 7:00:00 PM

Its great to make right choices in life..Yes bullies come in many shapes and forms...and one never knows a bully so well at times so it seems.A great message in yr poem..Guess it screams-Beware :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/30/2017 11:08:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, thank you for comment , so true ' Guess it screams beware ' :)) Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2017 4:43:00 PM

a powerful poem on physical and mental abuse Niall:-( the marks on the outside can be seen but the damage inside can be even more destructive:-( hugs Jan xx

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/29/2017 5:09:00 PM

Hi Jan , yes so true , I wrote this poem to remind people to stay well clear of abusers which come in male and female forms and they never never change there spots they will twist every word to keep you where they want you:(((