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Beautiful Girl

My beautiful girl fears she will lose more, dancing and prancing ‘til dawn’s early light- ‘Round and ‘round with someone new to adore, she struggles yet never gives up the fight. Wearing a smile with a frown on her heart, always needing more than what I can give- She’s the wonder holding up the fresh sky, stronger than she knows, ready to forgive. Laughing that laugh when she’s about to cry… it’s her beauty that makes her fall apart. *A tribute to my daughter dealing with mental illness* howmanysyllables.com April 22, 2019 Writing Challenge 2- April 2019- Its All About 10 - Poetry Contest Dear Heart

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Date: 5/24/2019 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beauty Luloo! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/6/2019 10:34:00 AM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece.
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Date: 5/5/2019 3:20:00 PM
Poignant this is, Laura. VERY nicely done. Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/22/2019 1:05:00 PM
a love immeasurable my heart shines through this piece, lou... huggs
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Date: 4/22/2019 9:49:00 AM
So loving! I can identify with you.
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