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Beautiful Feet

sijo Beautiful feet, he learned to walk by leaning on a friend. More beautiful still, when that friend moved on to let him walk alone. When he can lead a weaker one to walk, yet most beautiful. January 26,2012 Sponsor William Kekaula Contest Name Your Best Sijo

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2021 5:00:00 AM

I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 1/2/2024 2:07:00 AM

thank you, Sara. Have a Happy 2nd Day of 2024.

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/14/2021 1:22:00 AM

As any gift be, Reason, neatly wrapped present to be enjoyed upon opening. Truly, 'tis beautiful -- sweetly my friend, Aloha!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 12:08:00 AM

Reason, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/20/2015 12:42:00 PM

Such wisdom in this Sijo, Reason. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2015 12:14:00 PM

what a beautiful sentiment - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/19/2015 7:12:00 PM

It is beautiful when someone learns from us, then teaches another... A very touching write. Nicely done! Congrats on the win!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/2/2012 8:13:00 AM

warm congrats on your win in my contest, reason... the last line made this piece a memorable one!.. :) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/2/2012 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations I like this x

Kash Poet

Date: 2/2/2012 12:19:00 AM

An excellent write by you Reason.Congrats on your big win.

Greg Stanley

Date: 2/1/2012 7:39:00 PM

Reason, a very touching write. Congratulations on you big win, Greg

Jon Arno

Date: 2/1/2012 5:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your great write. Jon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2012 3:41:00 PM

This is so much like that idea called "Pay it forward" I love that kind of thing. Great creative thinking. Congrats on your win.

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/1/2012 11:33:00 AM

A real message here Reason. Nicely done. Congratulations

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2012 9:04:00 AM

congrats Reason on a super first place win for these wonderful lines.. luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/1/2012 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations on this meaningful sijo!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/1/2012 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Reason. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/26/2012 12:17:00 PM

Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Keep them coming Reason. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/26/2012 11:56:00 AM

Very good approach to do the contest here.Enjoyed the read.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/26/2012 10:36:00 AM

wonderful sentiment here, good luck in contest. harry