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Beautiful --Named For Celene Cresent--Thank You For the Name(:

[They] brush over closed lids of tear filled eyes, if only known why, why they so sorrowfully cry, but future tense gives none of secrets way to be held, and so the dreams fall to cries and the dreams of futures, barely tell...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2010 12:58:00 PM
Can i name it?BEAUTIFUL .Celene.
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Date: 6/2/2010 10:45:00 AM
Loving the last verse O.o And your structure gives me a sense of lyrical.It flows,and life and tears and dreams flow with it:) Beautifull one Boo
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