Beautiful Sunrise - the Whitney Style

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~Beautiful Sunrise~ ( Whitney Duet) Sunrise shines Appears again Spreads around Cover mountains Beach, above Clouds softly pass A band of geese fly high The air's cool And the sun's warm Delightful Wonderful time Warms my heart The songbirds sings His love shines upon my face. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 November.11.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/11/2016 4:24:00 PM

what a beautiful form and lovely imagery Dorian:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/22/2016 6:31:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:) Hugs!D

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/11/2016 4:14:00 PM

Beautiful! Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/22/2016 6:31:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Heidi, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D