Beautiful Sunrise - the Whitney Style

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~Beautiful Sunrise~ ( Whitney Double ) Sunrise shines Appears again Spreads around Cover mountains Sea, above Clouds softly pass A band of seagulls fly high The air's cool And the sun's warm Delightful Wonderful spring Warms my heart Songbirds sings His love shines upon my face. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 December.13.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/13/2017 6:31:00 PM

Beautiful poetry. Sounds like what I see in the morning when I take my little dog out and the sun is bright yellow-white against gray blue.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/14/2017 7:40:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Sunlite, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my sunrise poem:)) I deeply appreciate it! So very kind of you! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/13/2017 6:20:00 PM

This is beautiful Dorian...Love it...All the best my friend

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/14/2017 7:39:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Arturo, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my sunrise poem:)) I deeply appreciate it all! So very kind of you.All the best to you too my friend!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D