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Beach Blanket Bingo-W

(**I visited the Kuta beach in Bali, Indonesia in the early 90s.The expressions in the poem is the powerful of feelings recollected in tranquility today in 2009 remembering the visit.)
Beach I remember of getting wind in my hair Eyes were full of tears of joy and not grief And to stand on the sand and simply to stare Clothes dampening while playing “run away” Hear the wavelets at play tickling our toes. Be seated on the beach with feet in the sand Listen to ocean’s song to clear the mind And watching the crimson sunset at the same time Not to bother for any cares, watching God’s bounties. Kept roaming on the beach to find colored shells Eavesdropping to hear the ocean’s deep roar The tired mind to be refreshed smelling the salt. Behold the beach! Here I have found peace I have found love too, here, here and here Nowhere but on grains of sand that blankets Graciously and gorgeously offering a bed of comfort. Oh, the freedom to run, fall, hold, cuddle and coil.
+++++++++ Date 12-30-09 The poem originally in Free Verse was turned into Acrostic contest in 2011 but before I could submit it, the contest was closed). Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Free Verse Third place win Contest: Impress Me II by Giorgio V. Motif - Romantic/Nature

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Date: 2/13/2014 2:53:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is such a warm and inviting poem. Takes the reader on a trip to a faraway and exotic world of peace and serenity. Nicely done Thanks for the congrats and nice comment on my Society's Ignorance poem
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Date: 2/10/2014 12:58:00 AM
Congrats on your well expressed write!
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Date: 2/7/2014 4:24:00 PM
This poem was an enjoyable one to read in the middle of a cold winter! This really brought me back to a warm summer's day. A really great poem, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:22:00 AM
Congrats Dr. for a well deserved victory, the poem , no doubt, is in class of its own. Great one that will win anyday. Kudos. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/4/2014 5:40:00 PM
congratulation for the win. a nice work.
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:24:00 PM
enjoyed reading
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:08:00 PM
~~Ram~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2009 9:54:00 PM
I really like this, and the philosophy too!
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