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Be in the place which shows God’s grace; it’s the place of inner peace, where mundane things such as hate and envy you release. A joy you feel which is sublime at any time you try. Just do it! With ego shorn, now HERE you are reborn. July 4, 2022 for Unseeking Seeker's Ego Shorn, Here Now Reborn Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/15/2022 3:50:00 PM
lovely place to be... excellent work... this is a fav... Ann
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/15/2022 7:05:00 PM
thanks, it makes me feel better about getting N/A!!
Date: 7/14/2022 5:34:00 PM
Your mastery shines through, in this poem with its beautiful message. Have nice evening, Evelyn :)
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Date: 7/10/2022 5:40:00 AM
It's not so easy to get to that place, I did not put Find, as I know I can find or locate God.) It's only By His revelations.' Of whatever magnitude they May be, that we get to 'see?'God '
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Date: 7/8/2022 2:30:00 PM
Wow, love your thoughts on inner peace.
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Date: 7/6/2022 9:16:00 AM
Release, the most difficult thing for humanity! Well said!
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Date: 7/6/2022 2:12:00 AM
Sweetly done.
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Date: 7/5/2022 8:11:00 PM
Love the theme Andrea. We all need to follow your advice on this one. Wonderful write...
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Date: 7/5/2022 7:35:00 PM
While I'm in a biblical mood. Avoiding conflicts that say they're dumb or force the issue. which one of my neighbors has forced apon me. Taking your advice seems difficult with the conflict less than hours old. Love thy neighbor keeps comming up. Finding piece is in his court not mine.
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Date: 7/5/2022 1:26:00 PM
I enjoyed your thoughts through this fine Etheree, Andrea. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/5/2022 10:38:00 AM
I like your etheree message and the rhymes you worked in. Hope you had a nice 4th of July, my friend. Thanks for the email and the visits to my page ~ John
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Date: 7/5/2022 6:26:00 AM
In the presence of Jehovah is the place to be. It will take care of everything we need. I enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara
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