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nascent dawn appears kaleidoscope of color midnight sighs leftovers of last night plateful of unsaid words, a tablecloth of rapier-sharp folds & fireplace dying to be kept alive sensitive hearts feel powerful in mundane rain pelting petals think of others when eating remember pigeon food when fighting remember seeking peace paying water-bill remember cloud-nursed when homecoming remember homeless campers when sleeping counting stars remember sleepless, roofless foodless healthless hopeless be a candle in dark snow mixed drizzle ... dust-covered man holds hand of daughter dying slowly under slabs of concrete life illusion dream swoon ecstasy oblivion 1st Place Contest Winner Written: February 14, 2023 YOUR SELECTION AGAIN Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 7/27/2023 2:27:00 PM
Hypnotic beauty ~ like the moth to a flame :)
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:49:00 PM
great poetic writings; nice theme and creative work; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:31:00 PM
Powerful, emotive, and heartbreaking, yet with a positive message to be a candle in a dark place, and to always remember those of misfortune. Well stated, Lasaad, congrats for your POTD ~ John
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Date: 2/17/2023 8:15:00 AM
Wow so poignant and emotional with passages that tug at my heart . Such a beautiful soulful poem dear Sotto . Your heart shines here. A fav ! Belated congratulations on POTD and also on your first place win ! Blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 2/17/2023 12:20:00 AM
Surreal, magical, the way you’ve weaved the script and so beauteously too. Congrats on POTD, SP
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:42:00 PM
I can feel your thoughts so deeply, as they softly fall down the page. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. You're right, we should always be a candle. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:26:00 PM
Remarkable poetry in a lovely presentation style of writing Sotto. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 2/16/2023 5:52:00 PM
Great poem, amazing gift you have , congratulations on POTD
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Date: 2/16/2023 2:53:00 PM
Such marvelous Poetry from you Lasaad. A first place winner and Poem Of The Day. I have been away lately my friend but I want to Congratulate you for such a magnificent piece of Poetry and a Favorite for me. A difficult form to master you have Mastered. Congraulations again Lasaad.
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Date: 2/16/2023 2:17:00 PM
Every word in its place and every place an event! Rapier-sharp folds, plateful of unsaid words. O course a fav. Elizabeth
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Date: 2/16/2023 1:51:00 PM
Sotto, wow you are amazing! I love this creation, it looks like a lovely wave, and congratulations on receiving the deserving POEM OF THE DAY, honor, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/16/2023 9:55:00 AM
What an absolutely wonderful and thought-provoking write! Thank you for wiping the melancholy off of my heart congratulations on your POTD. With admirable reverence A.S.
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Date: 2/16/2023 9:51:00 AM
Beautifully penned Sotto, Congrats on POTD..
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Date: 2/16/2023 8:45:00 AM
awesome write, congratulation on POTD.Blessings my friend
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "Be A Candle" is a creative/wonderful write. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 2/16/2023 6:56:00 AM
Love this Lasaad. Nicely done in Open Form. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 2/16/2023 6:46:00 AM
Lovely thoughts and form! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/16/2023 6:34:00 AM
This is so cool! Congratulations on your awesome POTD, sir.
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Date: 2/16/2023 6:02:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Lasaad. Endearing sentiments throughout. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 2/16/2023 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your outstanding poem being made the POEM of the DAY! So happy for you !
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Date: 2/16/2023 4:56:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, Lasaad. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/16/2023 4:13:00 AM
Lasaad, a wonderfully penned and creative poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/16/2023 2:29:00 AM
I too seen that picture of the man holding his daughter’s hand whilst she lay buried under the rubble, I believe she was already dead, your poem is a candle of light towards the earthquake victims, and fully deserves POTD for compassion alone, besides sheer quality of writing too, cheers David
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Date: 2/16/2023 12:37:00 AM
We should all try and be that candle in the dark Lasaad. Congratulations on POTD. Enjoy your day. Tom
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Date: 2/14/2023 6:44:00 PM
Compassion is the greatest virtue. When we sleep in peace in comfortable homes, think of the homeless. When we splurge on delectable food, think of the starving. Be a candle in the dark and say a prayer for those buried in the rubble. Amazingly beautiful and deeply touching poem. Congratulations on your first place win. Into my FAVE
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