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Battling Addiction

As the midnight moon slowly traced its way across the starry sky it graced The urge for a hit held him in a seductive embrace As cold sweat dripped from his face The crack pipe was calling him out of his bed Unable to resist, he rose to feed his habit instead Addiction tortures the body and mind Sapping the will and ravaging the soul Shattering to pieces what was once whole And leaving just the shell behind Family and friends tried to find ways to help, and make him see the light But the call of the pipe was too hard to resist His hopes and his dreams went up in the mist With the help of a higher power he enrolled in a rehab program He finally realized that he should give a dam And tried to get his life back on track Before he died of a heart attack Cocaine, alcohol, ecstasy, crack Can become the monkey you cant get off your back It's been three years since he hit the pipe An addiction that almost destroyed his life He lost everything, including his wife He goes to meetings three times a week If he should relapse the havoc it would wreak He now had the power to fight the craves Either that or end up in a grave As the midnight moon made its way across the sky He thanked heaven above that he no longer got high

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/5/2017 7:29:00 AM
Very well written Joseph. With such an important message! :)
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:03:00 PM
JOSEPH, :-) CONGRATULATIONS in Anne's "Battling Addiction" contest.. I think very highly of Miss Anne, take care~ LINDA
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Date: 3/9/2013 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joseph xx
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Date: 3/8/2013 11:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win, good job :)
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Date: 3/7/2013 7:32:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph....great job!
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:29:00 PM
Yes awesome and an awesome journey, life is full of addictions ;) Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:18:00 AM
Awesome, poem, Joseph! The rhyming, the effortless flow and most of all a very serious theme. Addiction is powerful as it is terrible. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/21/2013 12:52:00 PM
Amazing journey of addiction and the struggles..hurts everyone involved in a persons circle of love....wonderful job
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Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2013 7:30:00 PM
thank you Donna
Date: 2/21/2013 8:39:00 AM
wow this is amazing poetry, one that injects so much feeling into this reader.. thanks Joseph
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Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2013 7:29:00 PM
thanks Harry
Date: 2/21/2013 4:26:00 AM
Wooow......amazing done Joseph!!! - Luck in contest !!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2013 7:29:00 PM
thanks Anne...hugs
Date: 2/20/2013 10:53:00 PM
I think you did an awesome job with this difficult topic, Joseph. I expect to be seeing this one on the winners list!
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Date: 2/20/2013 9:08:00 PM
What a great poem, if its about you, i praise you, keep strong. If figment of imagination well done....Seren
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Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2013 7:28:00 PM
No Seren it is not me.... I was never addicted to crack...

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