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Bathful of Thoughts

After a trying day, I find That a dip in the realms of poetrysoup Is like a warm bath with bubbles around So relaxing,, so reviving of the mind - Firstly I soap myself with words of others Rinsing them off with a comment or two Then I lie contented in a bathful of thoughts Till it’s time to wrap myself in what I write too - So IPad in hand I start to write The words flow like ice cream on a warm night Dare not stop to think, just write what comes next For an aperitif, I read the words out loud to find A glassful of Oh My’s follow the text As I peruse the words that flowed so easily Have to shell a few sentences along the way The walnuts of knowledge sometimes go awry I look at my effort, think hmm maybe yes ok Can post this in poetrysoup wait for their says See if this evening of laziness was what was required That my walk in the words of poetry relaxed my brain. In my bed, poetry free, now it’s time to start again 03/03/2013

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Date: 8/24/2014 11:09:00 AM
Seren, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 8/22/2014 12:02:00 PM
Hey Seren; Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. It is a beatiful explanation of a poetic mind at work. Expressed in such a thoughtful way. I consider you one of the "Poets True" that I mentioned in my latest poem "To All Our Poets True". Continue writing and sharing with us....Be Blessed. Neva
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/22/2014 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Neva. , for your wonderful praise ...Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 6:03:00 PM
This is a very original and wonderful poem...great job..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:12:00 PM
thank you Donna ...Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 1:37:00 PM
Seren I would like to say I can imagine you in the bath but it might seem wrong, I like this though...do you have 'pages ' on your iPad ?....good luck....ha and the captcha is 'shy9'.....David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/3/2013 1:58:00 PM
you can say,you can think, but no peeking...LOL Dafydd you might not believe this but I am shy....Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 12:54:00 PM
hi there hope oyu feel suitably bubbled and bathed in words flower xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/3/2013 1:57:00 PM
lol of course Mandy not like your jaccuzi though ....Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 9:25:00 AM
We all have our reasons to write poetry, I like your reasons my friend! It can be very soothing and relaxing to read and write poetry! You poem explains your heart in regards to poetry, a very tender reason! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/3/2013 9:54:00 AM
lol I think I have confused myself....Seren

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