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Bath Time

Multi-colored butterflies are at play flying as the rain does spray a bath you get under clouds of gray I watch you as I now pray Date Written: 7/21/2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2021 5:36:00 PM

this is adorable.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:19:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day......................

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/22/2021 8:17:00 PM

Reading this reminds me of a Friday night a couple of weeks ago when I got caught in a deluge while walking home from work.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2021 9:58:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Guess you got your bath like my butterflies did. Have a blessed day......................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/22/2021 1:05:00 AM

Love the butterfly bath image, Paula, fun write:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2021 10:30:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun bath time. Have a blessed day......................

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/21/2021 4:52:00 PM

Dear Paula, your wonderful imagery is fun and vibrant. A charming poem, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2021 10:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you like this fun one. Have a blessed day......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/21/2021 2:44:00 PM

Beautiful scenery; you created an interesting poem with word flow and great imagery. Have a wonderful evening, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you like this butterfly write. Have a blessed day......

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/21/2021 2:41:00 PM

Sweet...I could see the child in your words...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2021 10:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun butterfly write. Have a blessed day....................

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/21/2021 1:32:00 PM

Lovely pen Paula, great flow and fine imagery too. Have a great day, Gordon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2021 1:55:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day.....

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/21/2021 1:25:00 PM

We're in a heatwave at the moment, I for one will welcome the rain. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2021 1:55:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Sorry, you are in a heat wave. We could also use some extra rain. Have a blessed day.........

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/21/2021 12:54:00 PM

i was just soaked in the rain... enjoyed this one, could see the scene! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2021 12:59:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Sorry, you got soaked. Guess you had your bath for the day. (hahahaha) Glad you like this fun/cute "Bath Time" write. Have a blessed day.........

Ann Foster

Date: 7/21/2021 12:40:00 PM

Lovely. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2021 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun "Bath Time" write. Have a blessed day.............................

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/21/2021 10:57:00 AM

the natural way Paula, eh?? cute one.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2021 12:56:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day.............................