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Barrels of a Cracked Habit

The home where peaceful torch shines her wonderful glory a little conflict or disagreement tells another story. Examples of her madness line up as so many understanding the pain of her sting, simply choose any. A long bad history is an ingredient in every dispute no sensitivity to her partner, he must stay mute. On any slight provocation, she already shoots always in a wait to extend her bitter roots. To any live wound, she’s a biting worm dominating the situation, no matter its form. Gives the children an impression of a weak dad unknowingly setting to her daughters a wrong standard. A field so nutritious, for the home it will pass but with her in it, no way for growing grass. Red zone is complaining over her burnt pie redder is ignoring it and just passing by. Exposing her to be seen by all drills a long pit but for the home to fall. The riddle of emotions in her the devil wrote a patient man with the right responses is her antidote.

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Date: 7/28/2016 4:56:00 PM
There is strength in silence...still, sometimes one does crack...an excellent piece.
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:46:00 AM
yes Kiser. One does crack cos we all have our breaking points. Thank you so much for your time here.

Book: Shattered Sighs