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Through My Window

through my window bare branches reach for sun posted on June 4, 2018

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Date: 6/5/2018 6:06:00 PM
For some reason I like this one about oatmeal a little better than the other one. Maybe it seems more Haiku-ish to me. but I think the other sounded haiku too!
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Date: 6/6/2018 8:04:00 AM
LOL thanks, Andrea. I find haiku is 50-50... so much in the reader's willingness to play along with creating the image.

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