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~Breathless~ ( The American Cinquain Style ) You are So beautiful to me In your eyes I see love Moon, stars, in the warmth of your love I'm breathless. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2016
April.14.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~ Author's Notes: The "American Cinquain " is a poetry style created in 2010, by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000. My Cinquain version( The American Cinquain Style) goes by word counting, and not by syllable counting)

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Date: 4/14/2017 3:52:00 PM
Love sure is beautiful when it flows from your pen my friend. What an affection and passionate piece of writing.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/14/2017 5:42:00 PM
Hi Chris!:)Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by once again and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem and for your very generous 7 too.So happy that you liked this one too Chris.I deeply appreciate it all my friend:)) Have a very happy n' blessed Easter!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)) D

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