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Awaiting Her Love Monoku

sound of melting snow rocking to and fro the old worn chair __________________________________________________ Only Time Will Tell

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Date: 1/9/2018 6:33:00 PM

Well done, Rick. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*

Date: 1/8/2018 6:25:00 PM

Coming back with congrats. It is enjoyable to see the winners' list and notice the ones I liked the best. This is one of them!

Date: 1/7/2018 6:39:00 PM

so cool, Rick. I never thought of "sound of melting snow" I love original thoughts like that.

Date: 1/6/2018 5:58:00 PM

one of my favorites Rick...congrats!

Date: 1/6/2018 1:48:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Rick :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 1/6/2018 11:40:00 AM

Back with a resounding congrats. Love this one, Rick. Not enough rocking chairs nowadays.

Date: 1/6/2018 9:27:00 AM

Very deep Rick... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..

Date: 1/5/2018 9:12:00 AM

Indeed lovely ... Obviously merits a high position ...

Date: 1/4/2018 10:22:00 PM

Lovely, Rick. Well done.

Date: 1/4/2018 8:57:00 PM

Wonderful, so much in so few words, love it.