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Avoiding Cruel Task By Candlelight - Dh

AVOIDING CRUEL TASK BY CANDLELIGHT - DH her shadow quivers. (the hemisphere of a potted plant cool - a divisive mind.) she stands in the soil. she cannot move for she’s been caught. her breath catches, her fingers wrought. cucumber at her desk burns in hell - pinches the flame stark 1/18/2019 Diminished Hexaverse Sponsor - Charles Messina *American saying: cool as a cucumber can mean calm but also cold **stark - rigid as in death, harsh, blunt, strong, absolute

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Date: 1/27/2019 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Unique imagery!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! xx
Date: 1/27/2019 8:58:00 AM
Great take on the contest with this wonderful poem, Kim! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Charlie :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie <3 Kim

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