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Autumn-Ku

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Your smile, like flames My cold ire Melting Fall skies Weeping gray Soft cheeks, pelting Confetti leaves Dance, bright Weave our rug In your eyes Hues spin My heartstrings, tug Long walk Tree canopy Rainbow roof Hand-in-hand Autumn romance Frown-proof Cold and damp Bumps on your skin Shiver Hug, close This chill fall day Love-giver. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Charlieku 4-3-2" Poetry Contest, Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/24/2018 8:26:00 PM

Greg, congratulations on your great win in this Senryu contest.. great inspirational verses

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:28:00 AM

Thank you very much, Eve! :-) <3

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/24/2018 4:48:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, love your awesome poem congratulations on your win!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania - greatly appreciated! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2018 11:51:00 PM

wow, yours was amazingly poetic. I think the best imagery I've seen yet!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:29:00 AM

That's very kind, Andrea, thank you so much!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2018 3:10:00 PM

Beautifully penned romantic autumnal imagery Greg:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:29:00 AM

Many thanks to you, Jan ... so appreciated, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/23/2018 10:28:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Gregory. Love the flow of your theme. Congrats on your top win.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:30:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Line! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2018 2:25:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Gregory :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:30:00 AM

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, Anne-Lise - thank you very much for the kind comments! :-) <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/23/2018 2:03:00 AM

I love your entry Greg, especially the ending! Congratulations on your deserving win! : )

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:31:00 AM

Blessings and best wishes, Connie, and thank you so much for the sweet words! :-) <3

Charles Messina

Date: 10/22/2018 10:52:00 PM

Great poetry as always, Greg. Wow, I can't believe you didn't take first in one of my contests...lol I think this is the first time you didn't, but well worthy of it. None-the-less a wonderful write...Congratulations on your win...Charlie

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/22/2018 11:17:00 PM

I'll take whatever I can get, Charles, and you have certainly treated me well in the past, so I'm not about to complain - ANY placement is a blessing! Best wishes and thanks to you, my friend, I am honored! :-)