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Arriving through a carriage in red mold Lady of Fall spills colors which behold... Adorning the view in an ornate drape Her opals strewn along the flamed landscape; Rolling through Autumn’s fire and kindled mirth To endow a season with lush rebirth! How her blossoms rise in mauve and yellow Declaring passion as stars waltz for a flow... And hues turn crystal, gentle not rough Lusty in night's fold... soft like a cloud's puff, While flushed is that smile like her gown embossed Till varnished leaves glimmer on boughs tossed. ~ Lingering on, then waving a bright hand She drifts off... awed by her queenly command. ''''''''''''''''''''''' Colorful Fall Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron Entered 9/20/2018

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Date: 10/28/2016 7:05:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/27/2016 10:24:00 PM
Lovely images. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/27/2016 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/27/2016 1:20:00 PM
First line....what an aromatic visual. There is a certain "scent" on the air when Autumn arrives in the fulfillment of springs bounty.
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Date: 10/27/2016 6:58:00 AM
A 7! Painting autumn with words, Nette! GL!
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Date: 10/26/2016 9:25:00 PM
SIMPLY STUNNING MY FRIEND. You do imagery like no other. Vividly sharp and crystal clear in depth and form. Adding this gem to my fav list... 7
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Date: 10/26/2016 3:57:00 PM
Not so sure about 'mold' to start out, the imagery is stunning aside from that Nette. Good luck.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/27/2016 3:06:00 AM
Gotcha Nette, facepalm! I've been sick, I'm sticking with that. :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/26/2016 4:06:00 PM
the meaning of mold here is " shape, cast, or style".. hope you got the drift, paloma.. thanks!
Date: 10/26/2016 12:01:00 PM
- So beautiful written, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2016 9:20:00 AM
This one is sure to win, Nette:) simply mind blowing:) a 7:)
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Date: 10/26/2016 8:41:00 AM
Painting a masterpiece with words so fine is an achievement that few can master dear, nette. Good luck my friend!
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Date: 10/26/2016 8:39:00 AM
Lovely images you paint with your words, nette. I love it!
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Date: 10/26/2016 6:48:00 AM
Lovely Nette, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 10/26/2016 6:16:00 AM
Nette, that was stunningly beautiful!
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Date: 10/26/2016 6:14:00 AM
Enticing poem for Autumn as your word choices are ablaze! Where do you get your pictures; they enhance the mood of your verse!
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Date: 10/26/2016 6:08:00 AM
Beautiful words ... Nice personification ... Great poem ...
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