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Autumn breeze

HAIKU - AUTUMN BREEZE


Soft breeze of autumn
blushing play of falling leaves
a lonely girl cries

T.J Grén

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/8/2018 5:46:00 AM
Why does she cry? Because she does?
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Teppo Gren
Date: 4/8/2018 6:15:00 AM
Perhaps she is lonely. Thank you for your visit, Kai. Appreciated. T.J
Date: 3/3/2017 6:31:00 AM
Great haiku TJ... A7
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Teppo Gren
Date: 3/3/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. T.J
Date: 2/27/2017 10:42:00 AM
You have done very well with this haiku, Teppo! You have a way with sonnets, but this form can easily become part of your repertoire! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/27/2016 11:40:00 AM
a very touching haiku TJ - love the sad final line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teppo Gren
Date: 8/29/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. T.J
Date: 6/8/2016 3:56:00 PM
Reminded me of one maybe having to go away to school and being homesick..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Teppo Gren
Date: 6/15/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. T.J
Date: 2/23/2016 5:54:00 PM
Hi T.J. An excellent Haiku my friend, well thought out, well written. You capture a moment in life encapsulated by your words. This was very well done. I Love Haiku T.J. One as good as this, it gets a sven rating and goes right into my faves.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 2/24/2016 3:32:00 AM
You are very kind with your comments, Vladislav. Thank you for this, a seven and fave. Your support is much appreciated. T.J
Date: 2/17/2016 2:30:00 PM
Beautiful, haiku, Teppo. You should write more of the genre. Elaine
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Teppo Gren
Date: 2/18/2016 12:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eileen. I may try a few more. T.J
Date: 2/2/2016 8:59:00 AM
Beautiful, sad, cool.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 2/18/2016 12:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Iris. T.J
Date: 1/25/2016 12:22:00 PM
Excellent haiku my friend,bl
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Teppo Gren
Date: 2/18/2016 12:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your visit, BL. Sorry for not replying earlier - sometimes miss a few with being so busy. T.J
Date: 1/17/2016 1:27:00 AM
A sad HAIKU my friend... yur last line came as a bit of a shocker, but the overall effect is superb. Well done my friend! Keith
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:25:00 PM
...and you succeeded my friend! K.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 1/17/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thank you, Keith. This is the first Haiku I had evere written. This was a bit of a try at something different from writing only sonnets. T.J
Date: 12/9/2015 10:30:00 AM
Great haiku! Very touching, sad. I don't see many like this.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 12/9/2015 11:53:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan. I value your encouraging comments. T.J
Date: 11/19/2015 11:35:00 PM
Hi Teppo, great haiku. the imagery is complete, yet sad... SKAT
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Teppo Gren
Date: 11/19/2015 11:57:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT. My first attempt. T.J
Date: 11/19/2015 3:57:00 PM
this is really nice. Very haiku-ish for me!!
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Teppo Gren
Date: 11/19/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. T.J
Date: 11/19/2015 11:30:00 AM
The tender times. Like the tenderness of this haiku. love, daver
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Teppo Gren
Date: 11/19/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Daver. T.J
Date: 11/17/2015 6:07:00 AM
A nice haiku
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Teppo Gren
Date: 11/17/2015 6:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Yarishiya. This was my first attempt at writing a Haiku. T.J