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Autumn

September has ended although the warmth lingers as over gold fields sun is running long fingers. October will come in, bedazzling trees while leaves bright and beautiful dance on each breeze. October will exit with both fun and fright as kids collect candy on Halloween night. November’s arrival will make days get grayer, but happiness reigns with each Thanksgiving prayer. When there’s frost on the windows, folks say, “Winter’s here.” But the fall lasts almost till the end of the year! For Line Gauthier's 'Bite Size Poem no12' Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/2/2018 6:26:00 PM
Love your Autumn couplets.....the pictures of Autumn you paint are wonderful. Very engaging. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 11/30/2018 6:51:00 PM
G'day Andrea … nicely described, and as you prepare for your winter, we welcome summer - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 11/22/2018 4:04:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Andrea. Well penned.
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Date: 11/18/2018 11:27:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem, Andrea!:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/15/2018 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Andrea ! :)
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Date: 11/15/2018 4:50:00 PM
I am so happy to see this wonderful poem receive the wonderful recognition it is so deserving of Andrea. Congratulations on your tip top win! : )
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Date: 11/15/2018 8:51:00 PM
thanks, dear, I really appreciate that. Well, I got through 2 and a half days of comments I had no time for. Now off to more things I want /need to do!!
Date: 10/26/2018 4:44:00 PM
A great set of couplets, Andrea. I loved the content and flow of the first two verses in particular.
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Date: 10/20/2018 9:55:00 AM
You always do these seasonal pieces so well, this one doesn't disappoint. Well done Andrea...
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Date: 10/20/2018 9:24:00 AM
Hi Andrea, May your Autumn ever sing in its beauty. A wonderful write on a wonderful season. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/18/2018 12:48:00 PM
Your imagery is stunning Andrea. I know I will see this beauty at the top of the winning list! ; )
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Date: 10/17/2018 3:00:00 AM
Enjoyed having a second bite at the cherry, Andrea:) May your autumn never be in a hurry to depart. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/16/2018 1:58:00 PM
It sure does. A wonderful Autumn poem; thoroughly pleasant to read.
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Date: 10/16/2018 5:31:00 AM
I like your use of months to describe Autumn, Andrea:)
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Date: 10/16/2018 3:43:00 AM
This is beautiful and delightful, each couplet is worth pausing over. Love it ... CayCay
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Date: 10/15/2018 7:14:00 PM
In some places winter starts in fall..Gl in the contest Andrea..
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Date: 10/15/2018 6:38:00 PM
Andrea, you painted a lovely poem on the transition of seasons, very nice and best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 10/15/2018 5:59:00 PM
Your poem dazzles in the autumn..the sun, the breeze, Halloween fun..a sure win, Andrea.
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Date: 10/15/2018 4:54:00 PM
Fall does have a way of lasting until Christmas here in the South. Didn't know it was the same where you live, Andrea. Beautiful description! Soup mail, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2018 4:12:00 PM
Lovely autumn poem, Andrea. Soup mail
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Date: 10/15/2018 3:48:00 PM
This was really nice Andrea. It is definitely a poetic picture of Autumn and a beautiful one at that.
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