Autumn-

_______________________________ beauty has fallen painting the pastel of love in a breath of fire - below the bare heights of mist Autumn's tapestry lies strewn _______________________________

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John Lawless

Date: 3/18/2015 6:45:00 PM

Congratulations Rick, Well done.

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 11:56:00 PM

Rick, CONGRATULATIONS, on your top Tanka win:) ~SKAT~

Harpreet Kaur

Date: 3/15/2015 8:02:00 AM

A beautiful tapestry of words!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/14/2015 7:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a very descriptive verse a 7

Greg Hoffman

Date: 3/14/2015 6:46:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish with this poem

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2015 3:09:00 PM

Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2015 10:47:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 9:16:00 AM

Rick, the way you did autumn was so enjoyable for me. You took the form and elevated it by the use of gorgeous imagery that evokes magic as seen through "bare heights of mist." The first line is such great word play on fall, and "breath of fire", wow. Congrats on your fine win in my contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 5:32:00 PM

such intense imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2015 4:17:00 PM

Rick, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/19/2014 7:05:00 PM

I love Autumn and have written quite a bit about it; so I definitely love this beautiful Tanka you penned in tribute to the season! Well done, my friend! Pandita