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At the Door of Death

(form 5-7-5 kawanagi) i must go you stay i'll wait for you forever till then live happy Submitted for contest 4-5 LINE POEM sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - November 28, 2017

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/2/2017 11:27:00 AM

Beautiful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/2/2017 3:48:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2017 3:28:00 PM

very nice, LIne. And as you said below, so true.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/30/2017 3:58:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/29/2017 4:11:00 PM

Departure leaves those who love, longing. Beautifully said Line! ; )

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2017 6:43:00 PM

So so true, Connie. Thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/29/2017 3:20:00 PM

I love this, Line. True love is unselfish, Just beautiful xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2017 6:42:00 PM

So true. Thank you so much, Mike.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 11/29/2017 1:43:00 PM

Line, a beautiful read this morning. Good luck in the contest, love, Juli-Michelle

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2017 6:42:00 PM

Thank you, Juli-Michelle.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2017 1:03:00 AM

Your poem brought a lump to my throat Line. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2017 11:55:00 AM

Awesome, Jan. Line xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/28/2017 9:18:00 PM

So much said in so few words, great write.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2017 11:56:00 AM

Thanks, Arthur. Much appreciated.