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As I Was Walking In the Snow

I had searched, as I walked in the snow, for Mackenzie, who just HAD to go. Then a bright yellow patch let me know I’d soon catch her, and I’d head for home, pup in tow. written February 17, 2018 for Kevin Shaw's As I Was Walking in the Snow Contest

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Date: 2/20/2018 5:38:00 PM
haha, we think a bit alike. I too did pee for MY limerick. (and something else as well)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/20/2018 6:22:00 PM
I liked yours too, Andrea! Janice
Date: 2/18/2018 8:46:00 AM
- Lovely done, Janice - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/18/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! Janice
Date: 2/18/2018 7:48:00 AM
Great limerick Janice..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/18/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, S.O.! Janice
Date: 2/17/2018 4:58:00 PM
well done, janice! i enjoyed this very much. best of luck in the contest...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2018 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ilene! Janice
Date: 2/17/2018 4:17:00 PM
Clever imagery of bright yellow patch to find the puppy!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2018 4:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 2/17/2018 3:22:00 PM
Yes the imagery is there. Quite adorable nonetheless. So happy you did not lose your puppy. LOL Very cute poem, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2018 3:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice

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