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As I Kissed You - Compact Poem

The twilight sky blushed as the sunset kissed the horizon While the universe blushed as I kissed you This form is what I call a Compact Poem, in case you were wondering. :)

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Maria Williams

Date: 5/27/2017 8:56:00 PM

Maybe compact in form, but descriptive words make it simply huge on meaning. ....Maria7+

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thank you again and again my friend.

Darren White

Date: 5/25/2017 12:00:00 AM

I already knew it was a compact ;p This one belongs to the compact ripples and shore one for me, as lovely and beautiful. It colours the sky, my heart and all of the world.

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 8:20:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend. I was hoping you would like it.

Sara Ella

Date: 5/24/2017 11:22:00 PM

This poem is compact on words but huge on wonderful!

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 8:19:00 AM

Aw, thanks so much Sara. I appreciate your kindness.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/24/2017 10:30:00 PM

It may be compact but it is sweet and creative, I like the double blushing reference :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 8:19:00 AM

Thanks so very much Lenna. I wrote a series of these little poems, they were fun to write. I am so happy you liked this one. I always look forward to your visits.