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On a harbor of restless shore she scans across the deepened waves, to end pain’s grim just like before... as necklace breaks, in chilled farewell. By edge of evening, time races with hope to drown in circling tides. Not a chance to hold stars’ graces, a wish tangled in poverty. Big dipper heeds her whimper, faint as dazzling light soaks in blue sea. Until her child harks ,” Mom, have faith; I'm here with you, through love’s glory.” By questioning the bleak of life her truth alights, now out of strife. Suicide Prevention Month Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo Rhyme-- Sonnet Form Re-submitted 9/16/2017

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Date: 9/21/2017 4:29:00 AM
lovely rhyme for such a poignant poem, loved it sweet lady. thank you and congrats ;)
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:12:00 AM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. Sorry for wishing lately. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/6/2013 6:00:00 PM
Oh my...now I'm crying.....congratulations well deserved top spot nette....sniff sniff
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:22:00 PM
nette, another lovely win... PD
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Date: 8/3/2013 8:39:00 AM
You will join the Bard's Band- at this rate.
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Date: 7/28/2013 6:13:00 AM
Stunning! This is a winner.
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:41:00 AM
This is an excellent sonnet very well-crafted by your amazing & lofty creative words as always my very dear friend Nette! Thank you so much for sharing! Wish you good luck and best wishes always! Have a blessed Sunday there! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/27/2013 3:11:00 PM
wonderful sonnet, my friend
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Date: 7/27/2013 10:37:00 AM
Your lines embrace all of life itself. All of the elements. In this case, family...damn. Great job!
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Date: 7/27/2013 7:36:00 AM
Your words hold such beauty and meaning, the way how you compose & express, is truly touching!!! Thankyou for sharing....nette,,, blessings cherie...<3
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Date: 7/27/2013 6:56:00 AM
This write is so beautiful I can't describe how gorgeous this poem truly is my friend! The heart surely obeys Nette!, within your poem it follows the "dazzling light, " and "circling waves!" I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this morning! What a glorious poem, a masterpiece you have formed! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/27/2013 6:34:00 AM
Lovely Sonnet ...missed you... xxx Michael
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