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As Was

impressions of doubt where my experience lies- I write and revise

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2010 3:27:00 PM

haha. A good one for teachers of English too!! andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 12/23/2009 9:19:00 AM

Love this too...Marty

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/22/2009 8:54:00 PM

Ah! A poet's dilemma, Brian! You very seldom think it is good enough! Peace and love to you, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/22/2009 5:36:00 PM

thought provoking poem, always looking to improve things,?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2009 9:34:00 AM

Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/22/2009 8:50:00 AM

Another unique senryu to back to back As Is ... luv your thought patterns.. unique...blessings.... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/22/2009 8:06:00 AM

I am so glad to know that one as gifted as yourself, does the same thing I do. I never can seem to leave "well enough" alone! Even after I submit a poem....doubt enters with a vengence!! :) Great poem, Brian! ~ Carrie

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/22/2009 2:09:00 AM

As Ever .... Always worth the read and a re-read .....

J.P. Bristow

Date: 12/22/2009 1:49:00 AM

Incredible and oh so true!! Thanks for sharing!

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/22/2009 1:47:00 AM

I go through the same impressions. Nice work Brian...Raul

Andrew Crisci

Date: 12/22/2009 1:35:00 AM

This is a great Senryu, Sir Brian Strand! I am like you...wriitng and revising: it's like my work never ends, but here's my consolation: a well-written poem standing in front of me, awaiting comments from other poets. If it is to their liking, I feel worthy of the effort. Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Cheers, happiness, health and more inspiration! Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Elaine George

Date: 12/22/2009 1:12:00 AM

The story of my life! lol. Lainie