Around Me..

Praying across the dark clouded sky’s. Feeling the presence of God through, Natures thundering cries. I am one and holy as I feel to be. Lucky to be alive when, Lightning strikes around me.

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Christy Hardy

Date: 6/1/2009 3:58:00 AM

I know you will think I am weird, but I love thunderstorms...they are magical, and beautiful......wonderful poetry, always, Christy

Diane Christian

Date: 6/1/2009 3:10:00 AM

aww beautiful, I used be scared of lightning when I was a kid but I am not now, so wonderfully written, God bless you from diane

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 10:27:00 PM

this is beautiful--yes everyday is a gift,we are lucky to see the wonders of this world for another day,and i love the imagery dark clouded sky,then lightning strikes--in our darkness God strikes us with his vibrant light--beautiful--charma