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Another Love-2

Another Love You hold me in thrall Charm me with your demeanor And draw me to you Like a kindergarten kid Is, by a wayside puddle. For: Chris Aichtner's 'Enter the Tanka' contest

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2012 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jag this is superb just love that last line xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 8:44:00 PM

Jag :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2012 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jag. This was a sweet analogy

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/17/2012 10:43:00 PM

Never the less quite natural & deft articulation Jag - the puddle metaphor is brilliant - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2012 2:21:00 PM

very sweet, Jag. YOu are my last Look-see for the afternoon. thanks for your comment and I hope to see you soon!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/17/2012 12:03:00 PM

Totally fun imaginative write! Who in the world demands such things as a poem--u have to be in the mood to write..it cannot be forced out like water! Anyways, this is stupendous...gwendolen

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/16/2012 11:24:00 AM

Enjoyed your Tanka tonight Jag! ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2012 2:43:00 AM

Lovely small poem jag - well written tanka. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

Date: 10/16/2012 2:09:00 AM

Lovely tanka here Jag!Enjoyed.