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Another Bare Foot--Collaboration

He watches her feet creamy and bare as she prepares herself for bed; removing her robe she stands for a moment in the gold of light, while his eyes gaze at her imperfect body, elated. A beam radiating from her face touches a male's spirit deeply, and pulling back the covers he touches her belly-- especially the belly, full and round until she caresses her man's face, then rests womanly limbs. Surprised, another naked foot kicks and leaves a deeper affection within his heart... “I'm barefoot and VERY pregnant”, she giggles “just ecstatic as you are”, he whispers. I SHALL COLLABORATE WITH YOU Contest of James Edward Lee Sr.-- a collab with a poet from TPS 11/27/2017

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Date: 5/17/2018 5:28:00 AM
This short write took me on a journey. Your clever pen was like an amusement park ride in the mind. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 11/30/2017 10:50:00 PM
beautiful write, Nette, congratulations on your well deserve win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/30/2017 9:53:00 PM
Clever write! Great concept. Congrats! On the placement in my contest. James
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Date: 11/27/2017 5:43:00 PM
Very sweet, great collab!
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Date: 11/27/2017 4:03:00 PM
Awwwhhh .. .beautiful Nette!
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:40:00 AM
A very sweet poem to read today. A great collaboration. :)
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Date: 11/27/2017 10:27:00 AM
A love filled poem!
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Date: 11/27/2017 10:10:00 AM
And well written poem..
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Date: 11/27/2017 9:33:00 AM
Very cute and sweet!
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