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"annabel"!!

Any way, she makes my heart beat pure. No one loves her like me I’m sure. Nothing will make me act in this way, Apart from this little one having all the say! Believe when I tell you she is a pain. Engulfed with “snot”, however this is her reign! “Listen Dad!” (I have to, or she’ll drive me insane)!

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James Fraser

Date: 3/20/2010 1:08:00 PM

Gareth, what a sweet Acrostic > i bet she's a little angel >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2010 3:47:00 AM

I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this morning Gareth. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 4:20:00 PM

A sweetie of a poem Gareth and "snot" or not.. they are treasures to luv and enjoy.. I have 4 sons so I know exactly what u mean.. kisses to little Annabel! luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2010 1:43:00 PM

Ah, she may be "a pain" sometimes, but your love for her shines in your poem, Gareth. Enjoyed very much! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/3/2010 1:32:00 PM

Oh! How you much love this little Annabel. Great write. Keep the creative pen flowing. I hope that you read this to her often. Sara

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 3/3/2010 11:01:00 AM

Brilliant Gareth, Love is a pain , I take it you have a child Your a lucky man , Congatulation Reading your comments on my work i think i have found a kindrid spirit and you are so right if you change the words then they must have been a lie, Nice 1 chap have a gooden

T.L. Drover

Date: 3/3/2010 10:07:00 AM

Love it! So true, but aren't kids so worth it?