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Above the clouds, past space and time, into a realm of light— it is there that angels weep, while I duel with the night. Their silver eyes watch my disguise, and mourn for my mistake. If my heart is true, they say, why do I let hers break? I grimace at the bitter taste, but it is also sweet— her poor dissatisfaction lends wings to my retreat. O angels! Surely from your perch, you really ought to know, why I cannot run to her, and set her heart aglow. For though I love her more than words, than life, than liberty, remember well her nature, and then you, too, will see: I am a man, a mortal. I have my faults and fears. Yet she is like a goddess, could claim you as her peers! Weep for me if you must, weep for her if you can. You angels bring such misery when you fall in love with man. 4 May 2016

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Date: 5/11/2016 1:29:00 PM
I'm slacking off when I should be studying. Just noticed this placed in the contest, so I thought I'd drop in and say congrats. =) -G
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/11/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thanks man! Hope you know mechanics out of the park!
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/11/2016 10:19:00 PM
know mechanics (and) knock it out of the park
Date: 5/8/2016 2:16:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest, well done, I like this very much
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/8/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2016 6:45:00 PM
Greetings James. Congrats fo your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/7/2016 9:42:00 PM
Congrats to you as well!
Date: 5/7/2016 10:17:00 AM
Hi James, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Mike.
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/7/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2016 7:54:00 AM
Great write James deserving high honors...
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/7/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/6/2016 10:41:00 PM
James, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/6/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thanks. I really liked yours!
Date: 5/6/2016 9:34:00 PM
James, I love that last line as it was set up beautifully. What a love story. Thanks for entering the contest
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/6/2016 10:30:00 PM
It was my pleasure. Thank you.
Date: 5/5/2016 6:01:00 PM
Wow, this sonnet is really good. Pretty epic theme throughout, but that closing line hammers it home. Thumbs up! -G
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/5/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks man :)

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