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Angel With No Soul

What did you ever see in me angel with no soul? With lustful eyes and sensuous sighs you made a heart your goal. You searched to find another to complete your twisted plan. My heart wandered by too close and was seized by your velvet hand. I never needed company, I was happy on my own. My head was full of dreams and schemes, my days well spent alone. But I gave you what you asked of me. How could my flesh resist? And you turned my thoughts of ecstasy to all fulfilling bliss. Our days brought sheer delight to us, with joyful revelry. Our nights became a lover's truth and you took the heart in me. Entered in "Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever" - Poetry Contest - Broken Wings 2nd place 5/15/2016 4:41:00 PM Written 3/30/2016

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Date: 7/24/2017 4:34:00 AM
Your work pulsates with deep emotions that echo in our imagination! Congrats Francis, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage! ;-)
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Date: 7/23/2017 3:13:00 PM
Angel with no soul, Lover of no foe. So said poet! Kudos!
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Date: 12/26/2016 7:13:00 AM
I think I know her, lol, but seriously an excellent poem.
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Date: 12/20/2016 9:58:00 PM
Sorry the angel took your heart. This is a very good write which flows well. Its a smooth read and you can feel the emotion.
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Date: 6/17/2016 6:54:00 AM
YES, I got to another oldie but goodie!! I am glad to see this was entered into the BW's contest and won. I really like it! Hope you did not get burned TOO badly by the soulless angel!! Congrats for the win.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 7/9/2016 1:23:00 PM
Ha, Ha....yes I did! I got burned by them all! ....Fran
Date: 5/18/2016 8:07:00 AM
Wonderful piece... Congrats for your placement, Francis!! ;-)
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Francis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 5/16/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 5/15/2016 5:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 5/16/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Brian.
Date: 3/31/2016 6:42:00 PM
Francis, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line, romantic. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 4/10/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Linda. The lines that come easiest to me tend to be my better lines. Fran...
Date: 3/30/2016 1:23:00 AM
Well sir, I loved your poem. Envious of your talent a little you found yourself a fan
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 3/30/2016 10:02:00 PM
Thank you Junia...Happy to please! Fran

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